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Tuesday, May 15, 2012
Creative Writing - Zoo Visit
One day you decide to visit the zoo, you become lost and find yourself
in a restricted area where you discover a strange animal that no one has
ever seen before. Describe what it looks like.
8 comments:
Anonymous
said...
He has 2 hornes, 4 eyes, a neck longer than a giraffes,a fluffy nose,big sabre teeth and and is purple and blue vertical stripes.
It is a light blue in the water splashing around, it gets out and it becomes a fiery red. It has no teeth, but a 50 inch long tongue. It has 5 eyes. The top one is a calm green. The one on the left under the top one is bubblegum pink. Next to it is a sunny yellow. And on the far right, it's a beige eye. The bottom eye is glaring and is as dark as a shadow. The animal has too many legs to count. It has a huge stomach, with happens to be the same colour as blood.
But that's not all about my monster. He spooks creatures like teachers {especially pipe cleaners} {very funny} because they use them as teddy bears! {laugh}
8 comments:
He has 2 hornes, 4 eyes, a neck longer than a giraffes,a fluffy nose,big sabre teeth and and is purple and blue vertical stripes.
It is a light blue in the water splashing around, it gets out and it becomes a fiery red. It has no teeth, but a 50 inch long tongue. It has 5 eyes. The top one is a calm green. The one on the left under the top one is bubblegum pink. Next to it is a sunny yellow. And on the far right, it's a beige eye. The bottom eye is glaring and is as dark as a shadow. The animal has too many legs to count. It has a huge stomach, with happens to be the same colour as blood.
Hannah
It is blue and has cute eyes and eats spiders and crawls like a creepy crawly.
Chiara
But that's not all about my monster. He spooks creatures like teachers {especially pipe cleaners} {very funny} because they use them as teddy bears! {laugh}
Chiara
it is 123456 meters long, twenty legs, its back is full of spikes
It has the head of a dragon, a body of a lion, legs of a cheetah and a tail of a cat
OLI IS COOL
he had green and blue stripes,big red eyes and a round purple polka dotted nose.he had pointy orange spikes going all the way down his back.
CeCe
it has the top of a lion and the bottom of an octopus and at is all manga!!! a sign near it says "The very rare, endangered lyopus"!!!!
lux is rad
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